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Re: Love

Postby Sakke on Mon Jun 15, 2009 2:29 pm

Helaku wrote:alright,boy,u gonna get it now...

Love inspires love can be a great source of inspiration
puts my heart on multiple fires when in love,guys say(dunno about others,but in Serbia) a girl set their heart on fire.im just trying how this effect is much stronger in my case.
and like unflattable tires (sth that cant be broken,destroyed,sth thats everlasting,even if imaginary,like here)
she binds me to her w/o wires I cant think of many things besides her.She binds me to her,meaning,I think of her a LOT,pal.a LOT!

love is great no secret meaning
like our date our dates,rly r magical :D
im telling u m8 I pretend to be singing this to som1,not to HER.
all along she was the bait like a fisherman,she was the bait i was supposed to bite(im a "fish") just to find out how great can my life b with her. ........

love is power love is powerful.HEUREKA! :P :D
like a tower this would prolly make much more sence If I had put it as the last verse,not as 2nd.
but it doesnt corrupt power corrupts ppl.love doesnt.
makes our best selves errupt it extracts the very best from us
helps us stand still keeps us in a both mental and physical shape.
on all life downs stay chill Almost nothing can get u depressed and "down"
and u dont need a pill Some ppl consume anti-depressives.....I dont.

love is like ice It sometimes really is.
slippery as gambling dice if u cheat in gambling games,ur dice are "washed" so they r slippery.not more than ice,but its just a comparison,and it fell in together great,becuz they make a rhyme also.
nutritious as rice East Asian people eat rice instead of bread.iTs just as nutritious as bread.Comparing rice nutritiousness to the soul-feeding effect that love has.
so sweet,so nice... (before "so sweet,so nice... add "love is" if u didnt understand)

Tell me sweet lies tell me sweet lies,it turns me on :P
bind me to urself w/o ties Make me think of u every day.(Shes alrdy done that :D)
and when I kiss your lips no secret meaning.
let ur toungue rips no secret meaning.
while holding your hips no secret meaning.
hold me tight,that it grips hug me with such a grip,that it starts to hurt.
u'll witness magical trips... and I will make ur deepest and most beautiful fantasies come true.

Tell me what you didnt understand.I hope I made everything clear now.

tl;dr
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Kerafym: Did Yoda just try to make fun of my grammar?
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Re: Love

Postby Magyk on Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:28 pm

tl;dr


More like too old, could not read!


+20 cool points if you get the reference.
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Re: Love

Postby GUARD!AN on Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:54 pm

Magyk wrote:
tl;dr


More like too old, could not read!


+20 cool points if you get the reference.


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Re: Love

Postby Helaku on Mon Jun 15, 2009 3:59 pm

well....I guess you dont understand how had i done it,so ill end trying 2 explain now...wont post any more stuff either :( :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :( :cry: :( :cry: :!:
Imaginez une forme. Pas comme les autres. Une forme qui peut influencer toutes les autres formes. Une forme qui peut changer de forme à une autre. Imaginez vous en êtes propriétaire. Ouvrez vos yeux.
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Re: Love

Postby C2PO on Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:17 pm

pooh and tigger
ran over a wookiee


This line made me bust out laughing Duo.
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Re: Love

Postby Awrc on Mon Jun 15, 2009 6:21 pm

Don't post and ask for opinions if you arn't open to them (wheter they are good or bad). Some people here said your poem wasnt bad.

However, My opinion was and still is that your poem blows and needs to be reworked.
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Re: Love

Postby dadeus on Mon Jun 15, 2009 6:35 pm

the success or failure of any art is not in the type of comments or reaction but the amount. Your poem resulted in a ton of responses and other poems as well. I would say it was a success.
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Re: Love

Postby GUARD!AN on Mon Jun 15, 2009 8:17 pm

dadeus wrote:the success or failure of any art is not in the type of comments or reaction but the amount. Your poem resulted in a ton of responses and other poems as well. I would say it was a success.


That's deep and very insightful, I fully agree with Dadeus, I'd say your poem was a success helaku.
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4. a terrifying dream in which the dreamer experiences feelings of helplessness,
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5. The sensation and muscular spasm caused by an electric current passing
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Re: Love

Postby tens0r on Mon Jun 15, 2009 10:34 pm

He's not yoda wflz!
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Re: Love

Postby Turky on Tue Jun 16, 2009 12:26 am

C2PO wrote:
pooh and tigger
ran over a wookiee


This line made me bust out laughing Duo.


yes, that it did.

but I do love how duo and wafflz completely ignored this comment of mine:

Turky wrote:and duo, do tell me... do you seriously think Yoda would have had the mental capacity to decipher my classbind system in a matter of a couple hours or less? really? if so, damn, he must have changed somehow.


I guess there's no objection, I must be right.

Yes this guy can be two fries short of a happy meal at times, but he's not nearly as bad as Yoda.
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